Nice poem, nice concept. I enjoyed the refrain, "so it is with my heart," which gave the piece a sort of quiet wisdom. The piece is grounded in nature, but displays its power in the abstract. It gets stronger in the final few stanzas. Thanks for sharing, hope to read more of your work.
So beautiful! I love this!!
Thank you so much, sister!!
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Nice poem, nice concept. I enjoyed the refrain, "so it is with my heart," which gave the piece a sort of quiet wisdom. The piece is grounded in nature, but displays its power in the abstract. It gets stronger in the final few stanzas. Thanks for sharing, hope to read more of your work.
Thank you for reading, and for this thoughtful comment, Ezra! I appreciate it.
Beautiful 👏🙌 thank you for making this!!!! Alive in Christ! Amen 🙌
Thank you for reading!!
Absolutely and I look forward to more and hopefully you'll consider doing the first one also!